Story Reveiw

The Sun and Other Inventions by Simon Cooke

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This story is about Grandpa Sid who goes to a Science Fair with his grand daughter. Grandpa Sid always wanted to be the best. Then people thought he was but actually he wasn’t.  Grandpa Sid said to the audience that he created the sun. Everybody believed him but actually he was lying. The other scientist became angry when the audience did not pay attention to them so they called the security guards.  

When grandpa Sid knew he was in trouble he took his grand daughter and ran away before the security guards could get him. This story takes place at the hall where the Science Fair was  held.  I liked this story because Grandpa Sid was so creative and brave.

By Moses

Article Review

The Vege Car By Peter Stevens

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This article is about James Nui who made a car that doesn’t use petrol or fuel. James Nui’s son, James Iti wanted to be included too, so he helped out. James Nui and James Iti made the new generation Vege car. I like the Vege car because it doesn’t need any petrol. This car doesn’t affect any people around the world. The sicknesses a normal car causes people around the world to die are asthma and cancer. This new generation car  is a highly brand new version of a normal car.

I like this story is because it is a wonderful car James Nui and James It have created.  When the car is going on the street, it smells like soup.  

By Moses

STORY REVEIW

Title A passion for Ponies by Donna Cherry

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This article is about a girl named Chelsea who loves her pony named Teddy. After school Chelsea goes home quickly so she could play. She looks after her pony Teddy everyday  when she comes from school. Chelsea had a friend named Sarah. She had a pony too.

Sarah also played with Chelsea and they groomed their ponies together. Chelsea and Sarah also cleaned up their ponies droppings which is gross and it looked like little tennis balls. Sarah loves her pony as much Chelsea loves Teddy.

Chelsea and Sarah do a lot together with their ponies like grooming, playing, brushing and a lot of other stuff. Sarah and Chelsea care a lot for their ponies body parts. If I had a pony I would do the same thing that Sarah and Chelsea did to their ponies. I would be dedicated like them.

I liked the bit about when Chelsea’s least favourite job was picking up the droppings it was really funny.