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Wednesday 31 August 2016

Persuasive Writing, Auckland Transport

Dear Auckland Transport,

Have you seen what has happened over the last few months? Have you even tried to prevent the problem of people passing away in your hands? Surely you must realise. But It is clear that you haven't. I really feel that we have to stop! And wake up Auckland Transport. People gone. I’m not saying it’s truly your fault but we have to do something to solve the issue. I’m absolutely certain those who have passed, families are crushed at the moment. I’m sure you think it’s the right thing to add in these fancy new trains but you have to reconsider thinking about the problems it will cause.

I agree with trying to help Auckland, and trying to keep up with modern time. I respect your decision. Without doubt it was the right decision. It’s just the problems that has occurred after the change. In my opinion you have to add more sound to the trains so the people crossing will know if a train is coming.

I also think the securities watching should pay more attention to what’s happening around them, such as people crossing and children entering by themselves.

In conclusion, I’m sure that you will understand what I have written and use the points that I have made to  help better the lives of people who may have had someone almost die from trains.

Yours Sincerely

Moses from Glenbrae School

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