Persuasive Writing, Auckland Transport

Dear Auckland Transport,

Have you seen what has happened over the last few months? Have you even tried to prevent the problem of people passing away in your hands? Surely you must realise. But It is clear that you haven't. I really feel that we have to stop! And wake up Auckland Transport. People gone. I’m not saying it’s truly your fault but we have to do something to solve the issue. I’m absolutely certain those who have passed, families are crushed at the moment. I’m sure you think it’s the right thing to add in these fancy new trains but you have to reconsider thinking about the problems it will cause.

I agree with trying to help Auckland, and trying to keep up with modern time. I respect your decision. Without doubt it was the right decision. It’s just the problems that has occurred after the change. In my opinion you have to add more sound to the trains so the people crossing will know if a train is coming.

I also think the securities watching should pay more attention to what’s happening around them, such as people crossing and children entering by themselves.

In conclusion, I’m sure that you will understand what I have written and use the points that I have made to  help better the lives of people who may have had someone almost die from trains.

Yours Sincerely

Moses from Glenbrae School

A Trip to Remember (PART 1)

BOOOM! The door shuddered as a group of figures burst through, they had been waiting for 15 minutes now, with guns on their backs, occasionally shooting the things following them.  Running through corridors and into different movie screenings, the things stumbled and fumbled after them ‘Now, you may be wondering, Why’s this happening?, well here’s the start’

Anways

Hi my name is Ben, My friend Tom and I have been on the run for years now. We are the Top criminals of America. We have been killing, kidnapping, robbing and we have been stealing foods because we are low on budget.

One early morning Tom and I were in the mood of stealing. So we did, We were low lifes who had no jobs, no place live, no nothing just things we stole. We were best friends who grew up being a  “wanna be gangsters”. Yup we were wanna be gangsters. Our teachers were right after all. When I think back all we ever did in class was mucking around, talking, teasing the teachers, bullying. We regret so much right now. If we didn’t do all those negatives things we wouldn’t be where we are right now.

We will probably have jobs, money, houses, food, etc. Look at us were poor, begging, stealing doing all the things normal people won’t do. It’s really emotional to think back but that’s the past let’s just move forward and forget. (Well back to the story)

2 Months later

We came to a house that was really massive. We went to search if anyone was inside. We went inside and found a movie screen and a lot of other rich stuff. We went to walk to the second floor and saw a man in the room eating. We asked him if he knew us and he said no. He told us if we wanted his house and we said yes and kicked him out of the house. We went to sleep and woke up to police outside the house wait for us to fight. Yes we had a fight, we got our gear and put straps of guns on us. We walk outside and started shooting them so they wont shot us back. We got away and Hijacked a car and drove off into the woods.We found an escape route which leads us to an beer shop. We went inside and got really drunk and then walk the rest of the way because if we drove, we could've died along time ago.

We carried on our journey which took us 5 hours to get out of the woods. We walked around the corner and found ourselves trapped because there were police everywhere. We killed all of them with our shotgun. We escaped again.

TO BE CONTINUED...(There's more to come)